Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the development of science and technology, working and studying virtually from
home
or anywhere has become a trend. Use synonyms
People
become aware that Use synonyms
access
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accessing
lesson
and job Fix the agreement mistake
lessons
task
can be less costly and less Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
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time consuming
when they do it from their comfort areas Add a hyphen
time-consuming
such
as Linking Words
home
, cafe, or library rather than Use synonyms
participate
onsite.
In my opinion, Wrong verb form
participating
this
trend can bring both positive and negative development Linking Words
depend
on how Wrong verb form
depending
people
deal with their flexibility and priority.
On the one hand, completing Use synonyms
job
from Add an article
the job
a job
home
will allow Use synonyms
people
to be more relaxed and manage their Use synonyms
work
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time
wisely. Use synonyms
People
who Use synonyms
work
from Use synonyms
home
will not rush Use synonyms
with
the morning hours and compete with the traffic problem. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, they will manage to do many other activities Linking Words
such
as preparing for breakfast, working out, or simply driving their Linking Words
children
to school. Use synonyms
Similarly
, Linking Words
children
who take Use synonyms
online
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the online
class
will not have the problem to be woken up Fix the agreement mistake
classes
abbruptedly
by their parents every morning just to get ready for school. Correct your spelling
abruptly
Children
may be allowed to opt what subjects and what Use synonyms
time
they want to start the lesson.
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On the other hand
, working and studying remotely Linking Words
also
have some drawbacks Linking Words
such
as the distractions of unplanned activities or unavoidable situations at Linking Words
home
that will lead to Use synonyms
the
incomplete tasks or disorganizing Correct article usage
apply
work
. Working from Use synonyms
computer
at Add an article
a computer
the computer
home
or anywhere else other Use synonyms
Change preposition
than that
that
office will Correct determiner usage
the
be
free up Unnecessary verb
apply
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people
pressure to complete Change noun form
people's
ourthe
jobs in the meantime. Correct your spelling
our
Therefore
, Linking Words
people
often postpone their Use synonyms
work
to do other unpredicted things that Use synonyms
are suddenly appear
during their Change the verb form
suddenly appear
work
hours. Use synonyms
For example
, a female teacher who teaches from Linking Words
home
will set the Use synonyms
time
to not only teachUse synonyms
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
do the housework. Linking Words
nNot
to mention the distractions from Correct your spelling
Not
children
after they return from school will certainly affect Use synonyms
the
Change the word
their
work
Use synonyms
time
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, students who learn remotely sometimes get distracted by their little siblings or by their smartphones. In Linking Words
this
case, they will not pay much attention to the lesson and have difficulties Linking Words
engage
in learning.
Wrong verb form
engaging
To sum up
, Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
long distance
working and learning Add a hyphen
long-distance
have
been a popular development among modern Change the verb form
has
people
. In my opinion, Use synonyms
this
trend can be up and down Linking Words
depends
on how Wrong verb form
depending
people
manage their Use synonyms
time
and priority.Use synonyms
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