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Your friend has had his/her first book published a few days ago. He/she has recently sent you a copy of that book. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, - Congratulate him/her for having his/her first book published - Thank your friend for sending you a copy of the book - say what do you think about the book

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Dear Sara Hope
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 letter finds you well.
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 week I received your book, which you recently published "The Human". I spent two days completing
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 book by reading. I noticed many ways to get rid of stress from work and family. Those are really helpful to everyone.
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, I need to congratulate you, on writing
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 book.
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, you choose the matter, stress is mostly affected by everyone in present generations. I need to appreciate doing good research to find root causes and I can understand how much time you spent writing
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, your research is lighten my thought process. I will try and improvise those ideas you mentioned. You know very well about me, I was suffering from stress for months. When I finish reading, I got the enthusiasm to practice acting. And I'm sure, your efforts make you proud. It will be sold by the record of selling units. Hopefully, you will receive an appreciation from the government.
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 will help your career to write more articles. If any chance you can come and stay at my home. My love Anand
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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