You lost an item while traveling on a bus. An employee of the bus company assisted you in recovering your lost item. Write a letter to the company manager to thank the employee. In your letter describe what you lost and why it was important to you how the employee helped you find it and explain how you felt after recovering it.
Respected Manager,
I am writing to share
a
incident that Change the article
an
happend
Correct your spelling
happened
with
me. Change preposition
to
Actually
I was going to Richmond Add a comma
Actually,
in
bus 301. Change preposition
on
In which
I lost my wallet Change preposition
Which
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
containes
all the Correct your spelling
contains
contained
singnificant
identity cards and other bank cards. As soon as I reached my work, I found out that I lost my wallet somewhere. I tried different ways to find it but I was unsuccessful.
After the whole day of Correct your spelling
significant
struggle
I got my wallet very next day because of the Add a comma
struggle,
driver
of the bus. Use synonyms
Accordimg
to Correct your spelling
According
Use synonyms
driver
, when he found it Add an article
the driver
in
Change preposition
on
bus
Add an article
the bus
a bus
and
tried to look Correct word choice
apply
in
it Change preposition
at
if
he Correct word choice
apply
can
get some information about the owner. As there was Wrong verb form
could
contact
card Correct article usage
a contact
of
me, he gave it to the "lost and found" unit, they contacted me and I got it back.
I felt so happy and grateful because I did not Change preposition
for
expected
the Change the verb form
expect
driver
will help me his best. Use synonyms
As my
friends Correct word choice
My
also
lost some items in Linking Words
busses
but never got Correct your spelling
buses
it
back so I was not sure if I would be able to get Correct pronoun usage
them
it
back or not. But the honesty and kind behaviour of the Correct pronoun usage
them
driver
won my heart. Use synonyms
The
Correct article usage
Last
last
but not least I want to thank the employee and Linking Words
company
for their help.
Regards
SimranCorrect article usage
the company
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completeness
Make sure to proofread your letter for any small spelling errors, such as 'singnificant' and 'accordimg.'
task response
Adding more specific details about the item's importance could create a more compelling story. For instance, mentioning specific cards or sentimental value could enhance the depth of your response.
organization
The structure of the letter is logical, with a clear beginning, middle, and end.
task achievement
You clearly expressed gratitude and explained the situation well.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is suitable, polite, and respectful.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.