The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.

The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
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The given graph illustrates the life cycle of the honey
bees
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.
It is clear that
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the growth trip for
this
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insect takes 34 to 36
days
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to age up. It begins with laying out the eggs to becoming a young adult who is ready to get pregnant.
According to
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what is shown in the diagram, once the young bee becomes an adult, it is ready to produce an egg within four
days
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. Each Female bee can lay one to two eggs max every three weeks. Once the eggs are laid in a suitable environment, they hashed within nine to ten
days
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.
Bees
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live 80% of their life as nymphs. Which means unmatured
bees
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.
Bees
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phase three times
while
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they are growing up. The
first,
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sconed and third phases take 5, 7, and 9
days
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prospectively.
To sum up
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, we can say that
bees
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' life circle has six phases. Three of them were considered as childhood.
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