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What technologies did you use to help you in your studies? Describe how it has helped you. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

#technologies #studies #support
There is no doubt that technological advancements have made big changes in the
education
 sector. Advanced mobile and computer-based applications enable students to study regardless of time, place, and financial background. Any student from any corner of the world can access
education
 remotely if that student
have
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 a smart device like a mobile phone or computer and an internet connection that connects that device to the global internet network. An application like Google
Classroom
 enables professors to create a virtual
classroom
 on the internet, though that
classroom
 works the same as a real
classroom
. Teachers can take video lectures, assignments, projects, quizzes, and other assessments too. These types of technologies help so many students living in remote regions who are
enable
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 to come to college. These technologies came upfront and became popular during the pandemic,
although
 it might have taken more years to get these types of technologies into real use. I can share
this
 from my real-life experience. Before COVID-19, I was in my second year of engineering. My class teacher and my classmates already knew about virtual classrooms, but they never used them. When the pandemic happened in the year 2019, all our lectures, practicals, assignments, and project work were carried out online using virtual classrooms. Despite online lectures and practicals, the quality of studies was maintained at the same level as in real classrooms. In
this
 way, advanced technological applications like Google
Classroom
 help us complete our
education
 during the
pendamic
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pandemic
. In conclusion, I think advanced technological applications help everyone access
education
 remotely.
For instance
, students are able to get an
education
 from top US universities sitting in Japan.
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