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Some people believe studying is important because it expands person's knowledge and understanding of the world. Others feel that is better to study at home because that is the best way to prepare for a career in the studen'ts owm country.discuss both these views, and give your opinion.

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Some individuals believe studying overseas is essential as it expands one’s knowledge and understanding of the world,
while
 others feel that it is beneficial to study at
home
 because it is the perfect way to prepare for a carrier in the pupil’s own
country
. Both these views and
opinion
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opinions
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 will be discussed below.
To begin
 with, getting
education
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an education
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 overseas is important because it increases one’s knowledge and understanding of the world. When one goes to a foreign
country
, they are faced with many challenges
such
 as language barrier or having difficulty in understanding English because of the accent example if a student from India moves to New Zealand, he/she may have difficulties
initially
,
however
 with time they will get adjusted to it.
Secondly
, foreign studying will introduce individuals to different cultures and traditions which they might not experience in their
home
country
, which will help
students
 appreciate and respect other cultures around the globe.
Thirdly
, some people believe that studying at
home
 is better as it is a good way to prepare for a career in the student’s own homeland. Local universities prepare
students
 for
local
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the local
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 job market so
when
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that when
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students
 graduate, they are confident to enter the workforce locally. Studying in own
country
 can
also
 retain employees
which
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who
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otherwise
 would migrate for greater opportunities overseas if they completed their studies abroad. In conclusion, studying in foreign land increases one’s knowledge
about
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of
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 language, culture and tradition. Studying in
home
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the home
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country
 prepares
students
 for
local
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the local
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 job market and
help
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helps
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 keep employees within the
country
.
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