You are selling your TV and you think your friend might be interested in buying it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you must write: 1.Why are you selling the TV 2.The specifications and price that you are quoting 3.Invite him/her over to your place so they can decide to buy the TV from you.

#tv #friend #specifications #price #place

Dear Rohan, I hope you are doing well.I heard that you are going to purchase a new TV . Actually, I want to tell you that I am going to sell my Television because of my hard work My boss Gifted me the latest Onida company TV as an Appreciation.so I do not need an old one at my house.The previous one I had near about ten years ago but it looks like the latest. I do not sell it because of any disability

as well as

this

time it looks like a new one .I give it to you at half rate

however

, there is a plus point of

this

is a Network connection you can easily attach to your mobile phone. So , please can you come to my home and watch it by yourself and after that you will decide about it . If you will be fine with that

then

I will definitely give it to you . I await a response from you , Best Regards, Kamaldeep

Submitted by kamalsadhar2 on Wed Jun 21 2023

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8 paragraphs

173 words

9.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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