The charts below show reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

The charts below show reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.
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The two pie charts give information on the basis of reasons why people choose to go to go to
work
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by cycle or drive. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that the largest proportion of people who ride bicycles made
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choice for health and environmental reasons, whilst the main advantage of driving to
work
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is considered to be the comfort of travelling by car.
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information of information, health and fitness and less pollution are reasons ven bof allover half of all people who prefer travellingreasone, each reason accFurthermore 3theurthermore, the next r reason is a lack of parking issues with 15%. As for driving by car, comfort is vitally important fomakingpeople, making up 40%.
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, distance to
work
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is a more significant concern for just over a fifth of drivers.
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, faster than the needing and the need to carry things to
work
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were almost similar, at 14%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • commute
  • sustainable
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • carbon footprint
  • fuel expenses
  • parking availability
  • gridlock
  • mass transit
  • individual choice
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