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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it’s better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is suggested that learning a subject in a
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 may be more productive than studying alone, at the same time some
people
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 have an opposite view. In
this
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conclusion.
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education is a cornerstone of modern society. A variety of different methods exist.
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,
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 classes or one-on-one lessons. There are some advantages
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 in a
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.
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, motivation and help from other students, because For some
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 it is necessary to feel support from someone.
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, teamwork helps to improve knowledge and gives more practice opportunities than learning alone with a tutor. Another important thing is price,
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 lessons are less expensive than private classes.
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, one of the benefits is meeting new
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, which helps to open the mind.
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, some disadvantages of that type of studying exist.
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, some
people
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 can feel shy and have psychological problems, working in
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group
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 with strangers. For
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 it will be easier to work alone with a teacher.
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 ,
while
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 working face-to-face with a tutor he will find
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 approach
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 for you and explain
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the material
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 in the way, which is most suitable for
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 person.
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, there will be more time during the lesson to explain
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 .
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, I think that both of the methods are very good, it depends on a person which method to choose . Some
people
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 need classmates for communication, support and motivation,
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 others find
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 suitable
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 alone with
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 tutor.
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