Write a letter to your friend inviting Him /her to a music concert. Please say. -Where and when does the concert start? - What type of music will be played there? Why do you think your friend will enjoy it

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Dear Steve, How are you? I hope you are doing well and your family is good. I am doing great here and I have just completed my studies. I have exciting news for you. You know what? There will be a

music

concert

organised in the stadium where we use to play.

This

is very near to my house. I really miss those days. The

music

concert

will be held on 24/11/2023

that is

after 2 days.

Moreover

, I have bought two tickets for us. The

concert

will be about a rap song which will be sung by Eminem. I am really excited about

this

concert

. He is an awesome singer afterwards there will be pop songs sung by Taylor Swift. ,

Furthermore

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,Furthermore

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the

last

song will be sung by Beyoncé.

This

is exciting. We both love these singers and you are

also

a big fan of

music

. As I know you have learned

music

I want you to join me in

this

concert

so that we can have fun together. Hoping to see you soon. Yours faithfully, John

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

178 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your friend inviting Him /her to a music concert. Please say. -Where and when does the concert start? - What type of music will be played there? Why do you think your friend will enjoy it

The Closing

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