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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebration, while others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views.

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One
 of the social concerns today relates to what is more important, spending
money
 on family
celebration
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 or not.
While
 it is widely commonly suggested that investing cash
on
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 family
celebrations
 is important, others believe it is
a
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wasteful spending. On the
one
 hand, it is argued that it is necessary to pay for
family’s
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 events. The main reason is that using
money
 for family occasions underpins each member's relationship. It is
also
 possible to say that contributing a lot of
money
 to family
celebrations
 brings each member together.
One
 good illustration of
this
 is my uncle, he is a worker and he is a busy person, he often travels with his family every summer so that he can have more time to be with his family and their relationship is pretty good.
On the other hand
, it is strongly believed by others that it is a waste of
money
. People often have
this
 opinion because in family
celebrations
, people spend too much
money
 just for
one
 day, and
then
 they cannot pay for life because of lack of
money
. A second point is that if too much
money
 is spent on occasions like birthday parties or weddings, they will not have any savings for themselves. Their living quality will deteriorate, and they have to work hard to earn
money
 back to pay for other events. In conclusion, there is a huge debate on
this
 issue whether
money
 should be spent overly or not on family
celebrations
. Personally, I tend to believe that spending too much
money
 on
celebrations
 is unnecessary for congratulation.
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