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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The emerging technologies make
people
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 read everything they want online without spending money, encouraging
people
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 not to buy printed
newspapers
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 or
books
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 in the future. I personally entirely disagree with
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 statement
due to
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 the fact that senior citizens are more likely to use printed
newspapers
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 or
books
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, and printed
materials
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 are easier for doing reading activities, which I will discuss in
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 essay.
First,
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elderly
people
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 like to read
newspapers
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 or
books
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 with printed
materials
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. It is because when they read online, it affects their vision
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 computer radiation, making them uncomfortable, and
also
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 because their vision ability is slowly decreasing.
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, Emeritus Academics buy, collect, and read printed
books
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due to
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 the fact that their vision ability has already decreased, so they are more likely to read
books
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 with printed publishing.
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, printed
newspapers
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 or
books
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 make
people
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 easily do a lot of reading activities. Printed
materials
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 are easy to bring and
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 more comfortable for highlighting important information, keywords, or findings from the passages.
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,
people
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 in East Asian countries,
such
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 as Japan, Korea, and Taiwan, bring printed
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 when they are mobility or going forth and back from work by using public transportation, and they will read the printed
books
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 in those vehicles.
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, I believe that in the future,
people
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 will still continue to buy printed
books
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 or
newspapers
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 to read what they want, even though the development of technologies will not replace the ability to read online without paying. It is because older
people
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 are more likely to read printed
materials
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, and it is easy to bring and do reading activities.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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