In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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Recently cause of technology there are numerous improvements in
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. Despite
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some people are not able to access enough
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and lack of sufficient meals makes them hungry. There are several reasons which lead to
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situation and in
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essay reasons and solutions will be discussed. About the cause of the problem, it's true that lack of education in several areas prevents them to succeed in various fields
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developed countries have had a wide range of achievements in
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, some Nations are deprived of
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knowledge.
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, lack of adequate equipment leads to not producing their needs and necessities.
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, in Africa, a number of places are deprived of access to amenities
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, climate issues and resource limitations are other factors in
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poverty. Some countries cannot have good
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because climate situation which doesn't let them try
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, in the north pole, there are numerous places where all seasons are snowing and
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severe low temperature is an obstacle to
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. In my opinion people in whole the world are responsible to solve their problems. Establishing an organization should be taken into consideration to solve
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situation.
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organ should donate charity to underprivileged families who are hungry in the world. It needs serious and responsible actions from governments and residents. To be more specific Nations must work voluntarily to help people who don't have
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and send them all kinds of
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to prevent their hungry.
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, I believe these suggestions will probably not solve the issue of poverty in some countries completely.
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, it is an effective way to give them
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and educate them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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