The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of
waste
collection
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by a particular compositing centre
during
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five years.
Overall
, the number of papers was the first stage of
waste
collection expect 2013,
while
the amount of garden
waste
was the lowest trend during the period
of
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mentioned.
According to
these statistics, there was a marginal decline between 2011 and 2013 in paper
waste
and stood at the lowest rate by 40
waste
tones in 2013. which it was increase rapidly by adding 30 tons of
waste
until 2015.
moreover
, the figure
of
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glass
waste
was between minimal 41 and maximal 52 during that period.
It is clear that
,
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the
tins
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waste
did not exceed from during the period of question.
Additionally
, the
amount
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of gardens had a remarkable drop from 32 to 15 in 2011 and 2012 respectively. In 2014 and 2015, the garden
waste
was 27 and 35
tones
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tons
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of
waste
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling centre
  • waste management
  • total waste collected
  • trends
  • categories
  • significant increases/decreases
  • analysis
  • public awareness
  • recycling policies
  • implications
  • future strategies
  • sustainable practices
  • waste reduction
  • data interpretation
  • environmental impact
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