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Living in a foreign
country
when
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I have to speak the
language
will be a daunting problem. I let you know the
positive
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and
negataive
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negative
about
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the question above.
Firstly
, speaking
a
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overseas
language
that you are living
can
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be hard as it
mabe
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may be
hard for the person if
the
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they
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just arrive from their respective
country
and they came for work and they
dont
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don't
know how
ot
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to
talk in the dialect the foreign
country
is speaking.
for example
, one of my
relative
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goes
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overseas for
a
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exchange school trip,
however
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,however
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she does not know the
language
she going. she was not able to speak the
language
at all and it was very difficult when she want to meet new friends in the exchange as they spoke
in
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the
language
very fluently.
However
, as time goes she was able to adapt to the
language
and
in
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at
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the end of the exchange she
also
had some friends.
HOwever
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, nowadays it is easier because
of
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the technology in
this
generation is better than
other
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in other
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generation
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.
for
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example, when I went to
country
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the country
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for a week,
although
it was like my dream
country
I wanted to visit
but
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I only know
little
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a little
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of
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about
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the dialect.
however
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with my phone, I could do anything.
i
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was able to
seach
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search
for food and use
the
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google map to direct me to the place and order food
with
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the
language
I am from. so it was easier and
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more advance
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advance
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advanced
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. in conclusion, yes there are some
pro
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pros
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and cons about
this
topic and
i
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sort of agree that
as
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if you need help and
neede
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need
converse to the
language
but could not get any help, it will be a worry. on the hand, thanks to
the
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modern technology and social network like
instagram
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Instagram
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or
facebook
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Facebook
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, we can do anything it
just
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up to you.
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