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Living in a a country where you have to speak foreign Language can cause serious social. problems, as well as practical problems. To What extent do you agree or dis agrees

#country #language #dis
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Living in a foreign
country
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when
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where
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 I have to speak the
language
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 will be a daunting problem. I let you know the
positive
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 and
negataive
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negative
about
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 the question above.
Firstly
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, speaking
a
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an
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 overseas
language
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 that you are living
can
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in can
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 be hard as it
mabe
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may be
 hard for the person if
the
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they
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 just arrive from their respective
country
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 and they came for work and they
dont
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don't
 know how
ot
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to
 talk in the dialect the foreign
country
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 is speaking.
for example
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, one of my
relative
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goes
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going
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 overseas for
a
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an
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 exchange school trip,
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however
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,however
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 she does not know the
language
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 she going. she was not able to speak the
language
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 at all and it was very difficult when she want to meet new friends in the exchange as they spoke
in
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the
language
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 very fluently.
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, as time goes she was able to adapt to the
language
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 and
in
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at
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 the end of the exchange she
also
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 had some friends.
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HOwever
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, nowadays it is easier because
of
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the technology in
this
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 generation is better than
other
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in other
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generation
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generations
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.
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for
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For
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 example, when I went to
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country
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the country
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 for a week,
although
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 it was like my dream
country
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 I wanted to visit
but
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I only know
little
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a little
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of
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about
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 the dialect.
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however
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,however
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 with my phone, I could do anything.
i
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I
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 was able to
seach
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search
 for food and use
the
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google map to direct me to the place and order food
with
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in
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 the
language
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 I am from. so it was easier and
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more advance
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advance
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advanced
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. in conclusion, yes there are some
pro
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pros
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 and cons about
this
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 topic and
i
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I
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 sort of agree that
as
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if you need help and
neede
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need
 converse to the
language
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 but could not get any help, it will be a worry. on the hand, thanks to
the
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apply
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modern technology and social network like
instagram
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Instagram
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 or
facebook
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Facebook
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, we can do anything it
just
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is just
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 up to you.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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