Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay taxes to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many

people

believe that

people

shouldn’t have to pay

taxes

to the

government

, and

they

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that they

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can save

their

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money

. I completely disagree with

this

statement because I think it is a big source of

money

for the

government

for construction and maintenance.

Due to

the high cost of construction and maintenance of buildings and infrastructures,

taxes

are a good source of revenue for managing expenditures. On the one hand, normally the population of a country is increased. Because of the growing population, the

government

should provide places for living.

For instance

, the

government

has to construct roads, build schools, parks, and houses for

people

in intact areas to make a place for living. So, the

money

that comes from

taxes

is very useful.

On the other hand

, except for new constructions, old buildings and infrastructures need to be maintained by the

government

.

For example

, in public transportation after some years of using buses, taxis, and trains they need to be renewed or maintained because they may lose their efficiency and functions and terrible accidents might happen.

Moreover

, they need to be expanded as well. In conclusion, some

people

say individuals should save their

money

and not pay

taxes

to the

government

. In my point of

view

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taxes

are an important source of

money

because the state has spent lots of

money

on the construction and maintenance.

Therefore

, I completely disagree, and individuals should pay their shares as

taxes

.