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Many humans say reading the news on the Internet is good. Other think newspapers will remain the important source of news for the majority human.

Nowadays our society is filled with different
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. Some people say that reading the
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 on the internet is a good way. Other people believe
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 will remain the most crucial source of
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 for most people. In
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 essay, I will explain both points of view and I follow the first view. It's true that many human beings like reading the
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. There are different ways to know the
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 and it depends on you. As you know some of the humans like to read
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.
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,
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 are a very crucial thing in their life. I think some of the old individuals like to read the
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 from
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. I think it would be good.
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, it is not harmful to their eyesight. If they maybe use the phone or TV their eyes may become blurred. What's more, reading
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 or books is a very good and useful process for everyone. In
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 paragraph, I will discuss the first View that I choose. It is given that some of the ones say that reading the
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 from the Internet is a good way. And I completely agree with
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 data. As you know, our current period is called " the Century of Technology". And there are different technology things like phone tablet television and other things like that. I think reading the
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 on these devices is very comfortable for everyone, because of
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, if you want to read a book or newspaper, you have to go to the market and you should buy it for an amount of money.
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, if you do
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 on the internet it's very easy. And it may be more cost-effective than buying on the market. And it has more facilities. In my conclusion, I have mentioned that both views are very convenient and comfortable to read for everyone

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