Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligent than human beings. While some see this as a positive development others worry about the negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The diagram represents the stages involved in preparing a storage place by using a material known as canvas.
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, from the data, it can be observed that there are seven steps involved in the process before the storage area gets ready. The first stage includes manufacturing of the canvas that has three layers, the bottom is
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • cognitive capabilities
  • technological singularity
  • ethical standards
  • regulatory frameworks
  • personalized services
  • erosion of privacy
  • misuse of AI
  • stringent
  • mitigate
  • advancements
  • dependency
  • efficiently
  • complex problems
  • quality of life
  • significant
  • intelligent AI
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