Some people believe that homework should not be given to school children. Others, however, say that homework is an important requirement for children to able to develop appropriately. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

School gives a significant role in the
education
system in the world. Apart from class work given in school, teachers provide appointments to students, for which some people believe that extra work should not be given to them,
whereas
others say,
homework
is a mandatory part to develop appropriately for offspring.
According to
the present learning system,
children
have many things to do
while
they are in school, even the
education
board
such
as the “International
education
board” has added different subject which can be part of a child's development through it. In a recent research done by a Non-government
education
organisation, their reports
says
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that subject which are there for students'
education
is more than the kids understanding level, for that the teachers provide their
homework
.
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the
children
are getting stressed out
due to
lots of
homework
given to them, as well the
children
are not able to get leisure hours to spend good times.
Whereas
homework
develops a kid's knowledge by practising the same work at home, which gradually helps kids to remember the topic very well. They need less preparation for their exams, as they have already revised their subject by doing
homework
. A well-known
education
organisation system did an experiment in 2005, where they took 50 students each from two classes of the same division and gave them the name
batch
1 and
batch
2. They gave the practice to
batch
1 and for
batch
2 they just provided classwork
along with
batch
1 for 2 months. And later than all the two batches appeared for their term exam, in which they came up clear output, that the
batch
1 student who was to do the
homework
received the best result as compared to
batch
2. In my opinion,
homework
plays a major part in developing
children
's minds. The main motive of providing
homework
is to practice the same topic, which would help the
children
to remember the chapter very well. Even though I would love to do
homework
,
while
on the exam preparation , the time I was able to revise the topic easily.
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