Some people believe that homework should not be given to school children. Others, however, say that homework is an important requirement for children to able to develop appropriately. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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School gives a significant role in the
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system in the world. Apart from class work given in school, teachers provide appointments to students, for which some people believe that extra work should not be given to them,
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others say,
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is a mandatory part to develop appropriately for offspring.
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the present learning system,
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have many things to do
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they are in school, even the
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board
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as the “International
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board” has added different subject which can be part of a child's development through it. In a recent research done by a Non-government
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organisation, their reports
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that subject which are there for students'
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is more than the kids understanding level, for that the teachers provide their
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.
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the
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are getting stressed out
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lots of
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given to them, as well the
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are not able to get leisure hours to spend good times.
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homework
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develops a kid's knowledge by practising the same work at home, which gradually helps kids to remember the topic very well. They need less preparation for their exams, as they have already revised their subject by doing
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. A well-known
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organisation system did an experiment in 2005, where they took 50 students each from two classes of the same division and gave them the name
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1 and
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2. They gave the practice to
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1 and for
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2 they just provided classwork
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batch
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1 for 2 months. And later than all the two batches appeared for their term exam, in which they came up clear output, that the
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1 student who was to do the
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received the best result as compared to
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2. In my opinion,
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plays a major part in developing
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's minds. The main motive of providing
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is to practice the same topic, which would help the
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to remember the chapter very well. Even though I would love to do
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,
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on the exam preparation , the time I was able to revise the topic easily.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Reinforces concepts
  • Self-discipline
  • Time management
  • Stress and burnout
  • Leisure activities
  • Meaningful homework
  • Academic progress
  • Balanced approach
  • Overwhelming students
  • Support learning
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