The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities.
The bar graph compares the annual
income
of three different jobs that are related to languages. Use synonyms
Overall
, the highest Linking Words
income
is for Use synonyms
interpreters
in Toronto and Munich, Use synonyms
while
in Paris Linking Words
this
job shares its maximum Linking Words
income
with Use synonyms
translators
. Use synonyms
Besides
Linking Words
this
, Linking Words
interpreters
and language Use synonyms
teachers
represent the highest incomes in Dubai. Use synonyms
In contrast
, these three professions are equally paid in Mexico, representing the lowest rates.
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To begin
with, Toronto has the highest figure related to Linking Words
interpreters
, getting paid $80000 annually. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
translators
and language Use synonyms
teachers
share the same Use synonyms
income
in Use synonyms
this
city being just over $60000. Linking Words
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, in Munich the interpreter is Linking Words
also
better paid, receiving over $70000 every year, followed by Linking Words
translators
, who earn over $60000. Use synonyms
Finally
, the lowest salary is for Linking Words
teachers
, with an Use synonyms
income
of $60000.
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Furthermore
, in Paris Linking Words
interpreters
and Use synonyms
translators
have the same Use synonyms
income
of just over $60000, Use synonyms
whereas
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teachers
earn above $40000. Regarding Dubai, Use synonyms
interpreters
and Use synonyms
teachers
share the same Use synonyms
income
of $60000 per year, Use synonyms
while
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translators
earn $50000. Use synonyms
Finally
, Mexico has the lowest rates in every profession, being all three language-related jobs Linking Words
similarly
paid with an annual Linking Words
income
of just under $20000.Use synonyms
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