The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

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The map illustrates how the college site has changed over the years from 2006 until today.

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, it can be seen that most of the facilities remained the same, some new features were added and few things were relocated. Nowadays, there is a brand new cafeteria in the centre of the map which connects almost every path. One of the paths leads to the bus stop is newly built in the north section of the field. Carpark seated in the northeastern part of the land has been split into two parts one for the car park and the other for bike storage. The library was moved and now is located on the southwest of the chart between the two college buildings. The sports field had a size drop from 2006 until today, making room for the Sports Centre beside a tree. Studying constructions remained the same over the years and

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the road which runs throughout the whole college .

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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4 paragraphs

160 words

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