In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if the try hard enough What are the advantage and disadvantages of giving children this massage?
Nowadays, some
children
think that if they try enough for their targets
, they will get them in the future
. In this
, essay I would look at both sites of the drawbacks and benefits of giving children
these massages and give some examples to them.
Firstly
, in this
century, because of recent technology children
can learn so fast. As you know, they can learn through cyber links like digital books or online education
programs which help them have communications with any tutor hole around the world without thinking about distance. Furthermore
, governments have to support them with grants and a healthy education
system which can help children
achieve their future
plans more than past generations. For instance
, there are so many schools and universities which give scholarships to children
who want to have higher education
and then
would make their own job.
On the other hand
, parents have to learn their children
that they have to have a real attitude about the world. Because, neither there are same rights nor are a lot of restrictive, therefore
regarding which country people are born in, we can guess whether children
could catch their future
life targets
or not. For example
, comparing two children
with each other the first one was born in Japan with high wealth because of good government management and the second child not only was born in Uganda in a poor family but also
does not have government support, however
these two person spend same energy for their targets
such
as education
but unfortunately the child was born in modern county has more chance to achieve his targets
than other child, therefore
where you born and type of family have big role in children
's future
targets
.
In conclusion, new technology such
as online classes or powers grants help children
make their future
, but which country you are born in and the type of your family or government is too important.Submitted by mehrdad.salahi2003 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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