You have invited a friend to visit you next month. Unfortunately, you are not able to meet him/her. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •Apologize for the change of plans •Explain why you are unable to meet him/her •Suggest another time for him/her to visit

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Dear Gagan, Hope you're doing splendidly! I am writing

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letter to inform you to cancel the plans

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for

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Aug 15, 2024. First of all, please accept my apology for changing the plans

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last

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the last

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minute. After a long

time

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time,

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we were going to be together to spend some quality time but unfortunately, it's not happening. There is a reason behind

this

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. Actually, I have to fly to

india

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India

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due to

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the health issues of my father. He is really sick. That's why I am going to board a flight on August 10,

2024

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and will be back after a month.

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, I know creating another plan is not a piece of cake for both of us because of

busy

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work schedules.

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, we can try to meet in

upcoming

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the upcoming

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winter vacations at my home. Let me know if that works for you. Hopefully, we will see each other soon. Best wishes, Waris

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coherence cohesion

Be slightly more concise in explaining the situation to avoid repetition and maintain clarity.

task achievement

Ensure all the necessary information is included and clearly explained, as you have done well in explaining your father's health condition.

suitable writing tone

The letter is overall friendly and maintains an appropriate tone for writing to a friend.

complete response

The structure is well-organized, and each bullet point in the prompt is addressed clearly.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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