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You have invited a friend to visit you next month. Unfortunately, you are not able to meet him/her. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •Apologize for the change of plans •Explain why you are unable to meet him/her •Suggest another time for him/her to visit

Dear Gagan, Hope you're doing splendidly! I am writing
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 letter to inform you to cancel the plans
of
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for
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 Aug 15, 2024. First of all, please accept my apology for changing the plans
on
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at
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last
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the last
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 minute. After a long
time
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time,
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 we were going to be together to spend some quality time but unfortunately, it's not happening. There is a reason behind
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. Actually, I have to fly to
india
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India
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due to
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 the health issues of my father. He is really sick. That's why I am going to board a flight on August 10,
2024
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2024,
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 and will be back after a month.
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, I know creating another plan is not a piece of cake for both of us because of
busy
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our busy
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 work schedules.
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, we can try to meet in
upcoming
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the upcoming
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 winter vacations at my home. Let me know if that works for you. Hopefully, we will see each other soon. Best wishes, Waris

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coherence cohesion
Be slightly more concise in explaining the situation to avoid repetition and maintain clarity.
task achievement
Ensure all the necessary information is included and clearly explained, as you have done well in explaining your father's health condition.
suitable writing tone
The letter is overall friendly and maintains an appropriate tone for writing to a friend.
complete response
The structure is well-organized, and each bullet point in the prompt is addressed clearly.
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