You have invited a friend to visit you next month. Unfortunately, you are not able to meet him/her. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •Apologize for the change of plans •Explain why you are unable to meet him/her •Suggest another time for him/her to visit
Dear Gagan,
Hope you're doing splendidly! I am writing
this
letter to inform you to cancel the plans of
Aug 15, 2024.
First of all, please accept my apology for changing the plans Change preposition
for
on
Change preposition
at
last
minute. After a long Correct article usage
the last
time
we were going to be together to spend some quality time but unfortunately, it's not happening. There is a reason behind Add a comma
time,
this
. Actually, I have to fly to india
Change the capitalization
India
due to
the health issues of my father. He is really sick. That's why I am going to board a flight on August 10, 2024
and will be back after a month.
Add a comma
2024,
Moreover
, I know creating another plan is not a piece of cake for both of us because of busy
work schedules. Correct pronoun usage
our busy
However
, we can try to meet in upcoming
winter vacations at my home. Let me know if that works for you.
Hopefully, we will see each other soon.
Best wishes,
WarisCorrect article usage
the upcoming
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coherence cohesion
Be slightly more concise in explaining the situation to avoid repetition and maintain clarity.
task achievement
Ensure all the necessary information is included and clearly explained, as you have done well in explaining your father's health condition.
suitable writing tone
The letter is overall friendly and maintains an appropriate tone for writing to a friend.
complete response
The structure is well-organized, and each bullet point in the prompt is addressed clearly.