Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals believe it is more necessary to reforestation in open
spaces
in rural and urban areas
than offers
more homes. I totally agree with Correct subject-verb agreement
offer
this
statement because plantting
more Correct your spelling
planting
trees
in open places in agricultural areas
and citises
is Correct your spelling
cities
environmentally-friendly
Correct your spelling
environmentally friendly
,
and can encourage Remove the comma
apply
people
to adopt active
Correct article usage
an active
lifesyle
,and Correct your spelling
lifestyle
lifestyles
also
ehance
the Correct your spelling
enhance
economic
of countries.
Replace the word
economy
To begin
with, there are several reasons why I believe the plant more trees
open
Change preposition
in open
areas
in countryside
and urban Correct article usage
the countryside
areas
is very extremely significant than provide
accommodations. Wrong verb form
providing
Firstly
, reforestation in open spaces
can contribute to address
Change the verb form
addressing
the
environmental issues namely, pollution, climate change, Correct article usage
apply
global
warming. Correct word choice
and global
This
is because trees
play a significant role to absorb the Co2 footprint from the atmosphere. Consequently
, platting
Correct your spelling
planting
trees
in open areas
in towns and cities can provide healthy
environment for Add an article
a healthy
people
.
Secondly
, platting
more Correct your spelling
planting
trees
in open areas
in rural and urban areas
can motivate local people
to adopt healthy
lifestyle. To illustrate, more green Add an article
a healthy
spaces
can incentivize people
to cycling
and Replace the word
cycle
doing
exercise in their Wrong verb form
do
neighboord
or public places, which these step can contribute to Correct your spelling
neighbourhood
neighbours
neighbour
reduce
Change the verb form
reducing
the
serious diseases namely, cancer,obesity, Correct article usage
apply
heart
attack. Correct word choice
and heart
A
as result, more green Change the article
An
spaces
can assist to mitigate the pressure in
Change preposition
on
healthcare
system Add an article
the healthcare
as well as
save a considerable amount for the governments via prevent people
to develop serious diseases. Finally
, plantting
more green Correct your spelling
planting
spaces
in open areas
can makes
agricultural and urban Wrong verb form
make
areas
more attractive for tourists. Therefore
, many tourists around the world will desire to visit these green places in order to enjoy and relaxation
, and Replace the word
relax
then
tourists will spend money in
hotels, Change preposition
on
public
transport, which Correct word choice
and public
this
can contribute to Correct pronoun usage
apply
boosts
the economy of Wrong verb form
boosting
country
.
Add an article
the country
a country
To sum up
, I strongly believe that more reforestation in open areas
in towns and cities is very important than building more homes,
because it can Remove the comma
apply
helps
to tackle Change the verb form
help
environmentals
issues, provide Correct your spelling
environmental
healthy
environment for Add an article
a healthy
people
, and attract tourism
industry.Correct article usage
the tourism
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