The maps below show the development of a city in HCM in 1995 and now.
The two given maps compare information about the improvement of a region in HCM in 1995 and now.
Overall
, the city has been developed sustainably from an agricultural area
to become an entertainment area
for tourists.
Looking into details, it is apparent that in the north, the farmland has been transformed into a golf course, by now. In addition
, all the trees in the forest park were chopped down and it has been replaced by a tennis court. Meanwhile, to the west of the farmland, some addition happened in the housing area
in which are constructed several homes. Furthermore
, to the south of this
housing complex, the shop zone has been converted into restaurants and opposite the shop area
, a new car park has been built next to the hotel. The fish market area
that is
located in the south of the city has been demolished to make way for apartments and a new fishing port has been built on the sea. In contrast
, the cafe is still in the coastline area
and there is no conversion for that building.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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