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You recently went to a restaurant but think you could have left your credit card behind. Write to the restaurant. In your letter Tell them when you went there Describe where you think you may have left the credit card Explain what you would like the restaurant to do

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Dear Manager, I hope
this
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 message finds you well. I am a regular customer at your restaurant and greatly enjoy my visits.
However
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, I believe I may have left my credit
card
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

 behind during my most recent visit two days ago. On that day, I came for dinner and was seated in the farthest corner of the dining area by one of your staff members. After paying for my meal, I think my
card
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

 might have slipped between the cushions of the couch or fallen on the floor. Since I have not used the
card
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.
elsewhere
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 after my visit, I suspect it might still be at your restaurant. Could you kindly check the area where I was seated or inquire with your staff if anyone found a credit
card
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

 and turned it
in to
Join the words
into

It appears that the two words in and to should be one word.

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 the lost and found? If my
card
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

 is located, I would greatly appreciate it if you could keep it in a safe place until I can collect it. Thank you for your assistance in
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 matter. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,

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single idea per paragraph
Consider breaking down paragraphs further if introducing a new idea.
complete response
The letter provides all required details: when you visited, where the card might have been left, and what actions you want from the restaurant.
suitable writing tone
The tone is polite and formal, suitable for a letter of this nature.
logical structure
The letter has a clear logical structure with a proper introduction, body, and conclusion.
greeting and closing
A polite greeting and closing are used effectively.
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