The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles
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The provided diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of
plastic
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bottle recycling. Looking more closely at the diagram, it can be clearly seen that there are a total of 9 stages in the process.
At the first stage
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in the recycling process,
plastic
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bottles
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are thrown into a recycle bin. After that, all
plastic
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bottles
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are collected and delivered by truck to a recycling centre. When arriving at a recycling centre,
plastic
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bottles
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are sorted by hand,
then
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the valid
bottles
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are
then
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compressed and turned into blocks. After that, the
plastic
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blocks are crushed by a rolling machine into small pieces,
then
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they are washed in water before being put in a machine to produce
plastic
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pellets. In the subsequent stage, the
plastic
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pellets are heated and combined to become a raw material.
Finally
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, the raw material is utilized for producing various finished goods
such
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as pencils, t-shirts,
plastic
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bottles
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, etc
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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