The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles
The provided diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of
plastic
bottle recycling.
Looking more closely at the diagram, it can be clearly seen that there are a total of 9 stages in the process.
At the first stage
in the recycling process, plastic
bottles
are thrown into a recycle bin. After that, all plastic
bottles
are collected and delivered by truck to a recycling centre. When arriving at a recycling centre, plastic
bottles
are sorted by hand, then
the valid bottles
are then
compressed and turned into blocks. After that, the plastic
blocks are crushed by a rolling machine into small pieces, then
they are washed in water before being put in a machine to produce plastic
pellets.
In the subsequent stage, the plastic
pellets are heated and combined to become a raw material. Finally
, the raw material is utilized for producing various finished goods such
as pencils, t-shirts, plastic
bottles
, etc,.
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