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The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Line graph describes the amount of petrol that
people
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use
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 in the United
States
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 and the United
Kingdom
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. From the
overall
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 perspective,the richest in the United
States
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spends
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spend
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 the least
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percent
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per cent
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 of
income
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for
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on
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fuel
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while
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 the poorest in the United
Kingdom
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use
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 the least
fuel
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. In
United
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the United
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Kingdom
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,
people
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 who have
the
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apply
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low
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low-income
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income
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use
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 from 0.5 of
income
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 to over 2
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percent
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per cent
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 of
income
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.
However
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,in the United
States
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,about 4 or 5
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percent
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per cent
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 of
income
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 is used for
fuel
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 among the poorest.For the
people
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 who have middle
income
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,in the United
States
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,they
use
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 less
fuel
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 than the poor
people
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 but in the United
Kingdom
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,they
use
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 more
fuel
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. In the United
States
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,the
use
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 of
fuel
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 decreases in the percentage of
income
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 among the richest and it is between 2 and 4
percent
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.
On the other hand
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,in the United
Kingdom
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,the more they
rich
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are rich
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,the more they spend on
fuel
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 and it is about 4
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percent
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per cent
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 of their
income
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 rate.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, use, states, kingdom, percent, income, fuel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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