The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are living. write a letter to the editor of the local newspaper. In your letter explain why are you writing? protest the development of this beautiful and necessary green space in your town. make suggestions for what people can or should do to stop the development?

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to show my dissatisfaction with the construction of a building near my living place. I am a citizen of XYZ building since 2000.

Moreover

, I would like to publish a post.

However

, I came to know from the news that government authorities are going to build a flat there. But, I would like to say that all residents are not happy based on some reason. First of all, It is the only place where all the young and old people go for a walk in the evening, and can sit there for a longer period of time. Students play cricket. Another reason is a secure place for kids, our children can play without any worry.

Hence

, the chances of kidnapping are almost low.

Thus

, If you could post the information about our strike

this

upcoming Monday at 10,00 am at our colony YH in your newspaper, It may be beneficial for us to stop the work. Hopefully, you will write about our concern. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Raj

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