Some people think that the government should use extra money to fund programs to improve the environment. Others think that it is better for the government to spend money to support artistic programs. Which option do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In

this

contemporary epoch,

the

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society is polarized into two groups almost equally whether the

government

should invest funds in environmental awareness or

to

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promote

differtent

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different

fields of

Arts

. From my perspective, both notions

appears

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to be rational,

however

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the allocation of

government

funds should be done

according to

the different priorities of the nation. The below essay will elaborate the reasoning to support each stance with some references which will lead to a logical conclusion.

To begin

with, there is no denying fact that saving the

environment

should be the utmost priority of any nation because of global warming and Pollution. Lack of awareness in public

contributing

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the

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deterioration of the

environment

. Authorities should organize seminars,

awareness

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and awareness

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campaigns,

build

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and build

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public parks in each locality to make the area clean, green and fresh.

Additionally

, promote afforestation to save the greenery and

penialise

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penalise

penalised

heavily who

disturbs

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the

environment

.

On the contrary

, I opine with the notion that

government

should allocate more funds to promote

Arts

in the

country

.

However

,

this

can be done only if the

country

is

substancially fulfiling

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substantially fulfilling

the basic needs of the society members.

Arts

showcase the

culutre

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culture

, traditions,

customs

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and customs

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of a nation. Nowadays, it is considered

as

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a complete profession. Promoting different artistic programs will directly lead to promoting

talents

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the talents

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of the people.

This

not only attracts tourists but

also

give

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name and fame to the

country

and the person globally.

Moreover

,

ecnomically

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economically

the

country

becomes progressive

due to

upsurge

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in tourism.

For instance

, hosting a musical concert or

buliding

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building

Arts

Museums can attract a number of tourists. To

recapitualte

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recapitulate

, as per the arguments aforementioned above, the

government

should invest in

the

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environmental improvements as it is the first priority for

a

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living a healthy and sustainable life. On the other

hands

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, developed countries should encourage

the

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artistic programs by providing more financial aid. The merits of the enhancements in

environment

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the environment

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are certainly too great but the contrary

cant

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can't

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be ignored either.