The map below show the village of skoeford in 1930 and 2010
The map provides information about the development of Skoeford village in the
year
1930 and 2010.
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Overall
, it can be seen that the rural area has a drastic change in the time 2010. The main developments of the suburb are retirement homes , schools and roadways.
On the one hand, In the year ,1930 the area has lots of shops on the roadside and a post office near the road. Linking Words
In addition
, it has farmland in the southwest corner of the space . Linking Words
Nevertheless
, in the 2010 ,period the farmland has been destroyed and they make the roadways better. Linking Words
Moreover
, it renovated the roadways better in the Northwest corner of the town and removed the shops in 2010.
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Secondly
, one of the main development is the primary schools in the village they extended the size of the buildings and added one new building. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the bridge remains unchanged and the gardens have been replaced by houses in the village. Linking Words
Moreover
, the large house has been renovated as a retirement house and new buildings were extended there. Linking Words
However
, the population has increased and houses were built in every part of the rural field.Linking Words
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