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In many countries, increasing numbers of people are becoming interested in learning about the history of the house or building where they live.

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In the contemporary world, individuals have become interested in the background
history
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 of the
places
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 they live, mainly it happens because it can be an interesting story, or the
history
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 behind them can increase the value of buildings.
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, there are some possible ways that
people
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 can acquire information, which I will discuss in
further
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 stages. Getting information about where a person lives is valuable because the past behind it could be a national prosperity,
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, if
people
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 know about the
history
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 of a place they can sell it at a high price to governments.
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, some
people
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 are just curious about it, because they want to keep the story alive and hand down it from one generation to another generation,
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, in Tehran there are a lot of historical houses, and the
owners
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 keep them just as heirlooms. Finding the
history
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 of these
places
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 is the other side. The
owners
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 can search about it in different ways,
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, some of them ask about the story, of the old
owners
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 whom they bought these
places
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 from, which can be a challenging situation because in some cases the old
owners
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 are passed away or they are not accessible anymore.
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, another path is that they can search on the internet from estate sites that are belonged to the government, maybe any useful data can not be found.
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, all the aforementioned points, can bring us to the conclusion that there are many reasons related to the growing up number of
people
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 who are looking for the past of
places
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 where they are living,
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 as selling that place at a higher price
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 the biography behind it, and some of them are just bursting with curiosity about the biography.
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,
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 finding clues is not as easy as it seems, info can be found on the internet or by asking the old
owners
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.
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