You had to cancel a meeting with a friend. Write a letter to him/her, in your letter - Apologise for cancelling the meeting - Explain why you couldn't be there - Suggest an alternative day when you could meet
Dear Fizzah,
I hope you are doing great. I am writing
this
letter to apologize for cancelling the meeting we planned at victorian cafe
Correct your spelling
Victorian Cafe
this
saturday. I am very sad to tell you that I will not be able to meet you.
I know you would be angry with me after reading my letter and you are allowed to show your feelings to me but I have a genuine reason to cancel this
meeting. Due to
extreme cold weather, I have got a throat infection and a high fever. My doctor prescribed me three days rest and stopped me to eat
fast food.
I am planning to delay Change preposition
from eating
this
meeting till next weekend due to
several reasons. First,
my throat infection will get better till then
. Secondly
, I will be feeling
healthy and will Wrong verb form
feel
able
to enjoy Add a missing verb
be able
the
delicious food at its fullest.
I hope you Correct article usage
apply
would
accept my apology and reply Wrong verb form
will
me
with a heartfelt letter.
Yours sincerely,
Zainab.Change preposition
to me
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph follows a clear and logical structure, with appropriate use of linking words and phrases to help the reader follow the progression of ideas.
coherence cohesion
Include a variety of complex structures and utilize a range of cohesive devices effectively across the letter.
task achievement
Your response completes the task with all parts addressed, demonstrating an understanding of the requirements. However, strive to develop each point further for a more robust response.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable for the context: polite and apologetic, maintaining an appropriate register throughout. To enhance it, you may include more expressions of regret and a clearer emphasis on the significance of the meeting to you and your friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite