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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
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The line graph illustrates how much
waste
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 has been accumulated by the three companies from the
year
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 2000 to 2015.
Overall
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, two major organizations show
drastic
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 drop in production till the end of the
period
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.
Company
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 A was the highest producer of
waste
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 materials since the beginning of the
year
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 2000 but it has significantly started to dwindle from 12
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 to 9
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 by the ending
period
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. Followed by
Company
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 B which was the second largest
waste
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 manufacturer at the beginning of the
period
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,
,
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however
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 it has seen a rapid fall from the
year
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 2005 and by the
year
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 2015 it has become the smallest manufacturer by formulating up to 3
tonnes
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 of
waste
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.
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,
Company
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 C was the least
waste
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-producing organization in the starting
period
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 with approximately 4
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 it has substantially grown to be a massive
waste
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 production
company
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 by the
year
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 2015 with more than 9
tonnes
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, year, period, company, tonnes with synonyms.
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