The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
The line graph illustrates how much
waste
has been accumulated by the three companies from the
year
2000 to 2015.
Overall
, two major organizations show
drastic
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drop in production till the end of the
period
.
Company
A was the highest producer of
waste
materials since the beginning of the
year
2000 but it has significantly started to dwindle from 12
tonnes
of
waste
to 9
tonnes
of
waste
by the ending
period
. Followed by
Company
B which was the second largest
waste
manufacturer at the beginning of the
period
,
,
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it has seen a rapid fall from the
year
2005 and by the
year
2015 it has become the smallest manufacturer by formulating up to 3
tonnes
of
waste
.
Lastly
,
Company
C was the least
waste
-producing organization in the starting
period
with approximately 4
tonnes
of
waste
nevertheless
it has substantially grown to be a massive
waste
production
company
by the
year
2015 with more than 9
tonnes
.
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