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More and more people are expected to be living in urban centers in the future. What probels will this cause? Should the government encourage people to settle outside the city?

It is predicted that city populations will continue to soar as
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 are drawn by the lure of opportunity.
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,
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, may lead to serious issues, particularly in terms of overcrowding and land degradation. In
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 essay, I will examine these
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 and explain why, despite them, do not agree with the idea of encouraging
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 to move to regional areas
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. There are two main issues that may stem from the rise in city populations. The first is simply overcrowding. Clearly, more
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 in one place will mean more competition for jobs, housing, and space,
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 more pressure on infrastructure like hospitals and transport systems. These
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 in turn may lead to others
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 as homelessness, slums, severe stress and related health issues for residents The other major concern related to the growth of
cities
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 is the environmental impact not only will the air be polluted by the increase in traffic, but more waste will be produced and more land deforested to make way for urban sprawl and farmland. As Melbourne grows
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 instance, vast tracts of bushland including delicate habitats and ecosystems are already being turned into farms and housing estates. Despite these concerns, in my view, the answer does not lie in encouraging
people
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 to move out of the city. In fact, doing so would simply push the problem into rural areas. If,
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, Melburnians were pushed into Geelong or Ballarat, the
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 would simply be relocated tooStreets would be overcrowded, the environment would be degraded and so on.
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, the government should work on making
cities
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 better places to live. In Malmo, Sweden,
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, buses are powered by food scraps and the majority of travel is done on bicycle, thanks to the extensive bike path network with
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 innovative thinking and smart investment, the high-density
cities
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 of tomorrow could be green, efficient and comfortable. In conclusion, as
cities
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 grow, some
problems
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 are unavoidable. in order to minimize them, the authorities need to plan ahead and make
cities
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 smarter

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