The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

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The line graph illustrates the quantity of waste material generated by 3 different organizations from 2000 to 2015. The units are measured in

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, it can be clearly seen that company A produced most of the garbage in the initial year as compared to others and firm C stayed at the lowest by producing only 4 tone litter in 2000. Starting with industry A, a downward trend has been observed, as it peaked at 12

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in 2000 and with a dramatic decrease, enabled to lower its scrap production by approximately 3

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after 15 years.

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, the opposite progress has been noticed in terms of organization C. In the beginning, it was awarded for minimum throwing,

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with the passing of time it threw almost 6 tonnes of useless products and became number 1 among all for wasting more than 9 tonnes in the year 2015 Moving toward the B industry, in early 2000

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firm waste below 9 tonnes and

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number changed to above 9 after 5 years ,But

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firm became popular in 2015 by lowering it is worthless statistics to 3

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only.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tones with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

191 words

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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

Many people from rural areas (are) moving to the cities. What problems can this cause? what can be solutions?

Some people believe that watching TV is good and makes life more enjoyable. Others, however, feel that it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

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