Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter • describe what you like about the library • say what you don’t like • make suggestions for improvements
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I can share with you my ideas and thoughts to enhance
library
services, in addition
to, developing the library
facilities.
Firstly
, I like the library
atmosphere where is everyone quiet and shows discipline. Moreover
, the library
has an excellent system to search for books and papers by involving Al in helping the users to search for what they need.
Secondly
, what I do not like is the Wi-Fi connection is a very slow connection which affects my work on the internet. Furthermore
, some chairs are not comfortable to sit on because they need some repairs.
Finally
, I would appreciate it if you could contact the internet service provider to upgrade the speed of the internet. Also
, could you please fix the chairs that have some broken parts and send them to the factory?
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Ahmed AlostazSubmitted by basemhamedd on
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coherence cohesion
Your letter is well-structured, but you could improve the logical flow by using more connective words and phrases. For example, using 'in addition' instead of 'moreover' can make the transitions smoother.
task achievement
Make sure to address each point in detail. Your suggestions for improvement are good but could be more specific. For example, you could mention how an upgraded Wi-Fi connection would benefit users or specify which chairs need repair.
task achievement
The letter has a suitable writing tone, which is polite and professional, fitting the context of the task.
coherence cohesion
You have included a proper greeting and closing, which adds to the formal tone of your letter.