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Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news, while others believe that more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Recently,
people
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 have different views about the
way
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 to learn about
news
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. Some
people
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 think that using
newspapers
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 to discover
news
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 is the best
way
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, others believe that using
media
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 is more effective. In my opinion, I believe that
people
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 can read the latest
news
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 from both sources. On the one hand, it can be argued that
newspapers
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 are the main
way
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 to learn about what happened.
Firstly
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,
newspapers
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 are a classic
way
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, which means that a whole host of
people
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 would like to choose it, especially older
people
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, and
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 is because of that using it is their day-to-day habit.
For example
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, it is common to see an elder reading newsprint in the morning in a cafe or a bus station and so on. What is more,
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 are more reliable, since before they
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 pass more than three colleagues checked to make sure the content is correct.
On the other hand
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, some
people
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 argue that reading through
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 is more efficient. There are various reasons to explain it.
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, reading
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 utilizing applications on smartphones, laptops or tablet computers is more convenient which means individuals can read anywhere and anytime
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 as in the morning subways or in night taxis
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 of seating for a long time to see it.
Secondly
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, the notifications of
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 are real-time. If something happened suddenly when the phone is used, the
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 will pop into the eyes, which means
people
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 can know it the first time. In conclusion, it seems to me that
newspapers
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 and
media
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 are both a good
way
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 to enable
people
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 to learn about what happened in cities, courtiers and the global world.
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