Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent decades, there has been a growing trend toward technology .

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some

people

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especially

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in terms of scientific research, business and the academic world.

while

other

people

believe that it is better to keep the

information

confidential . In my perspective , the

information

should not keep secret as will

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not

detrimental

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the public . The topic will be discussed

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in the following paragraphs On the one hand , the new generation

are

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eager to know about the

information

and

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familiar with the latest update to be gained in

in

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costless .

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, keeping something hidden may arise

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discrimination between rich and poor

people

.

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,

student

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in school may not get

people

education since they could not afford these

courses

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fees which lead to

disappointed

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and

underestimated

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.

Finally

.

Consequently

, hiding these

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will result in economic growth as down .

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, individuals feel secure when they

invests

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a huge amount of money to head a project , because of

lack

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of knowledge ,

in addition

, the concerned authorities should

reveals

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the details to the community .

On the other hand

, there are some drawbacks to having free access to

these

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this information

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information

,

firstly

, some

organization

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organizations

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put in a lot of

the

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effort

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the researcher in order to get rewards for their dedication .

Such

as , many pharmaceutical companies spend years and

cost

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try

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to create a cure for an ailment .

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, when the drug

being

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available without any remuneration to the founders . The firm will eventually fold up as it cannot sustain itself .

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, in

academic

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teachers ought to be paid

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they can survive and

continual

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teaching the student

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valuable knowledge . In conclusion , it is undoubtedly that free access to these data

have

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their

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merits and demerits . In my opinion,

i

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think the

information

are

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precious to be available for every person and they should gain some profit because

this

hely

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helps

researchers to continue their innovation.