The maps below shows changes in the city of Nelson in recent times . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where necessary.

The maps below shows changes in the city of Nelson in recent times  . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where necessary.
The two maps illustrate how Nelson has evolved from 2000 to
this
present time.
Overall
, it can be deduced that a huge innovation has occurred in recent times
such
as , the construction of new facilities, the conversion of the road meant for vehicles into pedestrian usage only and the building of a new train line. In 2000, Nelson was very spacious and underdeveloped with just a university, a small rail station, an old market and a port across a motorable road.
However
, in recent times the place has developed into a beautiful
city
with the construction of a hall of residence close to the tertiary institution whilst the university's location and size still reminded the same over the years.
Also
, the trees in the Northeastern part of the
city
had been cut off and a new shopping
centre
has been built there. It can be seen that a rail line that connects the school to the
city
centre
has been made and the rail station had been relocated and refurnished close to the heart of Nelson. It can be depicted that, a bike rental scheme has been recently constructed in the
city
centre
while
the old market which was in the southwestern part of the
city
is now at the southeastern location and has been renovated .Presently, a new shop has been erected by the
city
centre
and a restaurant and a club have been constructed on either side of the port station.
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