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Nowadays most people read books online and there is decline in number of people reading paperback books. What are the advantages and disadvantages

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Technology has modified almost every part of human life and reading is one of them. Years back, people who love reading, used to sit in libraries for hours, to enjoy it. In today's world, every
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 is available in your room because of the Internet facility.
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, it has both pros and cons. Though it is cheaper and easy to read
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 in the comfort of your own home, yet , it is not always the preferred method by many.
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, online
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 are mainly pirated editions, it does not give any profit to authors. These online materials have the disadvantage of snatching the revenue of people involved in writing and publishing the
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. If
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 continues to happen, multiple writers
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 stop working in
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 field and switch to other professions.
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, a recent survey shows that there was a 15% decline in the publication business
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 year with 3 publishing houses closing for good because of loss. In the long run, it will give a major setback to our literature.
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, it fails to give the actual feeling of holding and enjoying the
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 which is essential for
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 lovers.
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, in
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 era of inflation, online material has helped students to save money. It
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 helps them to access multiple
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 without purchasing.
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, many of the medical
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 that were previously not available in third-world countries or out of reach from poor students are now available with one click.
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, I would like to state that though it looks quite interesting to find everything online, it still has a lot of disadvantages. It fails to provide enough benefits to authors and refuses to give them, their rights. It is important to find alternatives to provide writers with their due fee and
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 make it easy for everyone to find these
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 as well

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task response
The essay addresses the question but lacks a clear introduction and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a reasonable logical structure, but there is a need for a clearer presentation of ideas in the introduction and conclusion.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital library
  • e-reader
  • blue light
  • paper conservation
  • tactile interaction
  • memory retention
  • portability
  • collectible
  • eye comfort
  • sustainability
  • immersive experience
  • distractive technology
  • e-ink display
  • multimedia features
  • reading habits
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