The graph below shows average cabon dixide emmisions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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the average carbon

dicide

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dioxide

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emmisions

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emissions

per person in four countries:

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Kingdom,Sweden,Italy and

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Portugal

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from 1967 to 2007.It is clear from

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average Co2 was in

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Kingdom at 11 approximately and

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amount was in

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at 1.

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what is shown ,

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increased gradually till

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5 and

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show steady behaviour from 1997 to 2007

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in Italy there was

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increased

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from 1967 to 1977

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increased

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gradually

till reach almost 8 in 1997.

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, Sweden climbed sharply from 1967 to 1977

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a significant drop

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happened

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till reach 5 in 2007 . United

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show

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slight decrease

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through

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reached 9 in 2007.

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The graph below shows average cabon dixide emmisions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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