Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

In recent times, some individuals believe that the government spend too much

money

on the

arts

and

this

money

can be utilized in a different way. I completely agree with

this

view and do not support the unnecessary expenditure on the

arts

.

To begin

with, there are many other places

this

money

can be spent,

such

as education, infrastructure, social services etc.

However

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the most effective way would be to spend on

healthcare

.

This

is because I believe that

healthcare

is one of the most neglected sectors in many parts of the world and the public’s health is suffering because of

this

.

For example

, in the UK, many

healthcare

professionals

such

as junior doctors, are underpaid despite their hard work and commitment to their job.

Therefore

this

expenditure should be

at

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a higher priority as opposed to the

arts

. Now others would argue that spending on the

arts

allow

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for more creativity and inspire people to think ‘outside the box’.

This

may aid in preserving a country’s culture as there is a lot of history connected with the

arts

. Unfortunately, spending on the

arts

is of no use if the future students are not healthy and are not able to be as creative as they can. Because of

this

, it still would not be a good idea. In conclusion, it is true that the

money

should be spent

elsewhere

, in my

opinion

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healthcare

and should not be spent on the

arts

. The

arts

is

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a fascinating area to invest in and

is

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important across all countries but not

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the detriment of one’s health.