Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Robots
,
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of the modern technologies that
has
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been the topic of discussion by many
people
lately. One of the topics for the discussion is the impact
robots
will have on society. The following essay will discuss the pros and cons
as well as
my point of view. On
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hand,
robots
have several benefits. As an example,
robots
can help
human
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work
and could reduce
the productions expense
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the expense of the production
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.
As a result
, it can increase
the
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job effectiveness and help massive productions. Many others,
however
, are opposed and believed that
robots
are dangerous and have negative effects on society.
For example
, if the amount of company
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used
robots
as
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to
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human
work
are massive, it can increase the number of unemployed
people
.
As a result
, it can increase the chance of
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,
such
as criminality because of the large number of unemployed
people
. Not only that, before using
robot
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robots
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as an option to help someone
work
, they should take a consideration whether their
work
suitable
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is suitable
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for using
robots
or not, because not all
work
is suitable
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robots
. As an example, for several arts
industry
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that need detailed
work
. In conclusion,
while
the benefits of
robots
, particularly
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effectiveness and
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production expenses,
robots
can be a tool to help
people
do their
work
.
However
, there are some negative impacts too,
such
as the increased number of criminality cases and not too detailed
work
.
Nevertheless
, in my opinion, as long as we use it wisely, we could prevent and lessen the negative impact of using
robots
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Artificial intelligence
  • Automation
  • Technological advancements
  • Workforce displacement
  • Ethical considerations
  • Innovation
  • Labor market
  • Safety protocols
  • Machine learning
  • Human-robot interaction
  • Economic impact
  • Job creation
  • Cybersecurity
  • Autonomous
  • Precision
  • Dependency
  • Regulation
  • Risk assessment
  • Adaptation
  • Unemployment
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