In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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society

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phenomenon that a lot of rural

population

are moving to urban areas around

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, leading to decreasing

population

in the countryside. It is a highly controversial topic, many

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begin to debate the good or bad of

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this

topic.

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with, I would like to say that I partly

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this

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trend. There are two points to suppose advantages of rural-urban migration.

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, economic

opportunities

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the most attractive aspect. Moving to cities can provide more job

opportunities

and potentially higher wages for individuals. Because there are large various forms of economic,

moreover

citizens have contrary

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requirements

equipment

in aspects of life and work.

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, many

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many

opportunities

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job

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.

Secondly

, access to amenities is one of

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. People in the city usually have better access to education, healthcare and other public services, especially the elderly and children.

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, for children, they could enjoy the better quality of education in

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.

Furthermore

, they have more

opportunities

to learn a diverse of knowledge to broaden their horizons. For old man, they always get better medical care when

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illness. Whilst it is not an ideal phenomenon. There are some disadvantages of Rural-Urban Migration.

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condition

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to

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reaction.

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, with

this

appeared some

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, primarily, overpopulation in

city

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is

the

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terrible problem. There are potential

problem

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of overcrowding,

such

as housing shortages, traffic congestion and stress on infrastructure and public services. What’s more, rural are faced to decline areas,

such

as economic decline and underutilized land.

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, large land

are

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wasted in

countryside

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the countryside

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due to

people

who

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rural

population

leave their

home

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homes

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and move to cities. In conclusion,

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give

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some analysis about

this

situation. It is not a perfect phenomenon,

nevertheless

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I believe that the potential for economic growth and improving

individuals

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outweighs

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the disadvantages.

Finally

, I have some measures to ease these

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and more sustainably,

such

as promoting

balance

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of regional development to make cities more adaptable for

population

growth.