Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter: 1) invite him/her to a public event in your country. 2) Describe the public event. 3) Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit.

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Dear Kaswa I hope you are in prime health.I am writing

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letter to tell you about the upcoming public event which really fascinates me.

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,I would like you to manage your schedule wisely,

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,you can join us and be a part of

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captivating event. In the next month,the 75th birthday of Pakistan is planned to be celebrated on Independence

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,the entire city will be decorated with exquisite flags not only to enhance its beauty but

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to highlight the significance of

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day

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,the vibrant markets will become stuffed with a mammoth amount of people as they like to make

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day

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rememberable.

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,I've planned the activities for the entire

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,we will go to the Wagha Border in the morning to be a part of the National Anthem ceremony.

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,in the afternoon,we will have a delightful lunch at the famous restaurant.

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,in the evening,we will explore the Liberty market and enjoy the local cuisines.I am looking forward to hearing from you and I hope you find my plan engrossing. Best Regards Your Friend Ahmad Hassan Nadeem

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

176 words

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Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter: 1) invite him/her to a public event in your country. 2) Describe the public event. 3) Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit.

Health services are a basic necessity. However, private companies have made them quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages?

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