The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 1010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 1010 and 2017.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart illustrates how many tourists visit a special Caribbean
Island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, It can be seen that over the entire period, the figure for visitors with accommodation on both
cruise
ships and the
Island
experience an upward trend. In
this
period, the total of tourists visiting increased rapidly by 2.5
Million
( from 1
million
to 3.5
million
). In fact, In 2010, the figure for visitors staying on
cruise
ships stood at 0.25
Million
,
whereas
that of the
Island
was 3 times that. From
this
year to 2017, both of them saw a fluctuating rise of 1.75 and 1
million
, respectively. To be more specific, between 2010 and 2011 the number of visitors on
cruise
ships didn't change,
while
that of the
Island
went up by 0.5
million
, after which
cruise
ship users declined and reach 0.25
million
in 2012.
This
population increase moderately over the next period,
While
the
island
users experienced a fall from 1.5 to 1.25 between 2015 and 2016 but returned to 1.5 again in 2017.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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