Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

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Dear Suraj, I hope you're doing well. I am impressed by your enthusiasm for learning how to drive.

Firstly

, getting a license should be your primary priority as it will be considered the government's agreement for allowing you to drive. Nowadays, there is a lot of checking going on in every corner of the town by traffic vigilantes, so it's better to get a learner's license for starters to be out of any problems.

Secondly

, when I started my process of operating a vehicle, I met a driving expert, he runs a driving school nearby it goes by "Raj Driving School". Their tutors are very well experienced

furthermore

, their vehicles are all gladly maintained. Perhaps it would be a good idea to join it. My personal recommendation is to start practising during late hours as traffic will be less

moreover

, there will be minimal interventions by fellow vehicles on the road. I look forward to learning about your experience of driving. Best wishes, Prajesh

Submitted by prajeshtrivedi94 on Wed Jul 19 2023

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8 paragraphs

164 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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