Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As children are using that have both sides advantages

as well as

disadvantages.

According to

, me using a

phone

have more advantage compared to disadvantage. My viewpoint and opinion are discussed below.

Firstly

, there are so

much

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benefits

in

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to

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using a

phone

such

as it

give

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information, data, and even

knowleghe

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knowledge

about

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study

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. A student can easily

study

from the

phone

with the help

by

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the internet

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internet

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Internet

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.

For example

, kids living in

india

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can

study

from

a

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other country.

Due to

a

phone

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,phone

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it

have

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become easy to

a

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study

about

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new and different things.

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, it

good

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for

a

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apply

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kids to

use

mobile.

Hence

,

a children

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children

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should

use

phones during

the a

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school days.

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, there

are

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even some side

effect

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effects

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such

as using

for

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apply

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a

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apply

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social media and

a

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apply

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watching

a

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apply

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movies and

a

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apply

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songs and much more. Many a child spend

there

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their

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many for the fun parts

compare

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compared

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to

a

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study

meterials

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materials

.

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, using

mobil

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mobile

for fun

more

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is more

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other than

study

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studying

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.

Thirdly

,

a children

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children

a child

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this

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apply

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should be

ancourage

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encouraged

encourage

to

do

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apply

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study

from

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on

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the

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apply

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mobiles

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mobile

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. As it

have

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both sides but still a students should

use

a

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internet

. A school should allow to

use

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the internet

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internet

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. A school can get so

much

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benefits if kids

is

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are

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using mobile. In conclusion, as my viewpoint is discussed in the above information.

However

, mobile has some disadvantages but as it has more advantages so the child should keep using phones and learn new things from the

Internet

and help others and develop new things. In my opinion, a child should

use

a mobile.