Some students take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a common belief that having a
gap
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year
before entering the university has negative effects on Use synonyms
students
who just graduated from high school. Use synonyms
However
, there is a more persuasive argument that Linking Words
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will positively affect Linking Words
students
.
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hand, taking Use synonyms
one
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year
break before starting college life will lower Use synonyms
students
’ academic performance than others. Use synonyms
Students
who take a Use synonyms
gap
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year
would forget about how to study Use synonyms
such
as note-taking or writing a logical essay. Linking Words
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would widen the educational Linking Words
gap
between other Use synonyms
students
who directly enter college without having a break. Use synonyms
For example
, recent statistics show that more than half of Linking Words
students
who have a Use synonyms
gap
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year
tend to have low grades and struggle with their assignments and studying.
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By taking
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Taking
one
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year
off between graduating Use synonyms
school
and going to college would positively affect Change preposition
from school
students
in various ways. For Use synonyms
one
, through working, Use synonyms
students
could gain job experiences which could not achieve through courses and classes in universities. Use synonyms
This
can help Linking Words
students
to be employed without difficulties after Use synonyms
graduate
from the university since they have rich experiences which make them adapt easily to work. Change the verb form
graduating
Moreover
, Linking Words
students
can widen their thoughts and view by travelling. Use synonyms
For instance
, as they are able to experience different cultures and traditions in other countries, they might find out their new advantages or hobbies that may help them to decide their future.
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To sum up
, Linking Words
while
it is apparent that having a Linking Words
gap
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year
might make Use synonyms
students
’ grades to fall, in my opinion, it is undeniable that Use synonyms
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my has positive effects since they can achieve plentiful experiences and widen their view.Correct pronoun usage
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